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Room Of View |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Round rooms of white enlighten images in mirrors reflection revealing secrets held in darker places. Thoughts meet gathering glimpses into anothers mind where it's almost as if a spiritual rhapsody is warming me as I float free, coming to rest upon billowing pillows cushioning me in security, no such thing as falsity exists here in this place where all things pivot on trust and so it is thus that only to you do I bare this truth; this sacred view in round rooms... seek the flame within yourself |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and the rooms come in all sizes and shapes, a poem for each one then  |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
We all have our own poetic room to speak of and that is why there will always be a endless stream of poetry |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
We must bear truth! Is that a poet's curse? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~encircled by thoughts that become words we muse...then fuse our feelings together into recognizeable shapes, highlighting life's pathways~ I always enjoy viewing your thoughts. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write dear Donna. Love ya lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
If only all rooms were round rooms, but some would rather they not be such, sad yet splendid |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for allowing us Pipsters into this very intimate room and beautiful room - for what is more beautiful or real or ultimately tranquil (though sometimes cruel, harsh and devastating en route) than truth? I love your all of your poetry. - Owl |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
wow, amazing... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all, so much for stopping in! Owl~ sweet lady you are far to kind to me, but I truly thank you. I wish there were more time for me to spend here at Pip! Peace to all ~D~ seek the flame within yourself |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Donna, I, too, wish you could be here more often. Every time I see a Gentle Spirit poem I pounce on it like a cat pouncing on a grasshopper. - Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Donna...so good to read your lovely words again...I hope you are well! Happy Mother's Day!  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Donna, well-expressed, all poets should read this and keep it in their library. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
where it's almost as if a spiritual rhapsody is warming me as I float free Very beautiful visuals and feelings, dear Donna. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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