Precious Moon (inspired by Midnitesun's "Misty Moon")

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Open Poetry #37

Precious Moon (inspired by Midnitesun's "Misty Moon")

SilentShadow
Junior Member

since 2006-04-20

Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-13 07:00 PM

Moon so full,
On lofty pearch,
Among the stars tonight
Can't you see,
This broken heart in me,
And help me make things right
The one I love
Is e'er so near,
And yet so far,
As the stars that shine so bright
Wonderous moon,
My precious moon,
You seem to be so blue
And I wonder are you,
As alone as I feel tonight?

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2006-05-13 07:38 PM

Very deception

Like it

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-05-13 08:16 PM

Bravo, a fine write
and I enjoyed the thought of a 'perched' moon
Thank you for reading my moon write, and for saying it inspired you!

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