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Archea
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0 posted 2006-05-13 05:50 PM


for Toni,

looking at the sky
golden butterflys in a rose covered field
wondering
wishing
waiting
eternal bliss, just out of sight.
im floating on a cloud
to the one with the golden butterflys.



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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-05-13 05:54 PM


Very very nice...
Much enjoyed the feeling here.
Hugs~Nancy  

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-05-13 06:05 PM


that's a pretty picture you've created with your words
BROTHER JOHN
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3 posted 2006-05-13 06:47 PM


Your alliteration is so proper within this context.  Beautiful!


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Gaia
4 posted 2006-05-13 08:24 PM


what a beautiful write!
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