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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN 
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Bend me twist me spin me around. Put me on the corner shelf, with, other, things you've found. Shine me wrap me give me away. My heart is plastic. My mind is clay. Caress me love me I'm here for your needs. You can never destroy me, I'm guaranteed! |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
whoa, i liked the rythm of it. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The flow was perfect.. and the message was clear if not a bit sad. I liked this one.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bubblesleave, Unbelievable but well done. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was original and very, very good! Great message to anyone in this poem. No one can do anything to you that you don't allow them to do! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Much enjoyed the rhythmic rhyme in this, it flows nicely. Well done. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Thank You ALL SO MUCH! "smiling" |
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