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1998 - Flame the Light
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1998 - Flame the Light |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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Flames Come the words to blow your mind Comes the magic of vision Co-existance of fire and emotion Flame the light to the words Of Devotion Acknowledging nothing I learn to live Pay the tributes Bear the scars To bear an idea home In a land where no-one needs In a land where we would die If we ask to Find where need is paramount Within ourselves Dave Page |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
An interesting write..but not quite sure of subject matter?..or direction?...Thank you for the words though... Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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The words are clear Dave |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
thank you for the posting.. I like this i like the way it flows i like the way it feels |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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Another of my mind freelancing things Thanks for your words I write words that I know are not right but something that forms almost a picture It is a bit like putting the hooks in your mind and moving the words to backup storage Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is good that you spill your thoughts just so... even better when they command a second, or third read, just to settle in. Thank you, Dave... always an enjoyment. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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Thanks Sunshine Hope things are going well for you Dave |
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