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Open Poetry #37

Soft Touch Thoughts

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-18 07:11 AM

Soft Touch Thoughts

Bringing back the feelings
not just whispers in my dreams
but the gift of time, that slips away
opening all my seems...

Those that use to be at hand
that trained my eyes on you,
that lent me hope to seed my days
of futures, less the blue...

So wishing for the more of less
as silence lends my day
unfinshed thoughts to soften mine
and smile along the way...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-05-18 07:15 AM

So wishing for the more of less
as silence lends my day
unfinshed thoughts to soften mine
and smile along the way...

its so nice to have good companion thoughts to join us along the way

wonderfully written...enjoyed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2006-05-18 09:57 AM

yes...wonderful

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-05-18 10:01 AM

This reminds me of two poems I recently composed in thoughts of a special friendship

One is called "Love's Whispers" and the other one "Love's Silence" , such was the coincidence I found in your words above.

a poet who cares

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-05-18 10:11 AM

"Soft Touch Thoughts"
...
"and smile along the way..."

Moving from beginning to beautiful ending.

Linda

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