Open Poetry #37 |
Friends |
Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Cherish the friends you can count on. The number’ll be only a few. Others are false with their feelings. Sincerity nowhere in view. Put your trust in loyal people. Waste not your time on others who flee. When rough times are stubbornly lurking Alone and afraid you will be. Be guarded when seeking assurance From peers who are hollow and cold. Advice will surely point inward. Selfish motives forever untold. Honor that one faithful person Whose hands you can put all your trust. The chance may come once in a lifetime. A gift, solid as the earth’s crust. Look within yourself for comfort If you fail to find friendship elswhere. You are your one true confidant. Strong commitment you'll always find there. [This message has been edited by Youngatheart (01-21-2006 09:34 AM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very well written, YAH - nicely composed |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This is truth in its absoluteness. I loved this write as this is how I choose my friends and I have a friend named Marsha that Is the best next to God of course. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Honor that one faithful person Whose hands you can put all your trust. The chance may come once in a lifetime. A gift, solid as the earth’s crust. Wow, this is so true. Thanks for sharing. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
money is your best friend in this have and have not world...is a saying that has been passed down in the family... crude but real |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Thank you Lng,Jody and Fee.I appreciate your kind comments. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
In response to your comment on one of my comments, it looks by this poem that God is NOT very good at supplying your friends and you must... your quote: Look within yourself for comfort If you fail to find friendship elsewhere. You are your one true confidant. Strong commitment you'll always find there Exactly the point I was making, reiterated by yourself! Ivor |
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