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Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

0 posted 2006-05-08 03:21 PM

I am a hip hop artist and write my verse poetic...let me know if this is a good start for a poem....

Definition of a Poet (11sylables)

Swift gentle strokes formulate compositions
Put people in awe like art exhibitions
Fueled by prolific thoughts exhale emotion
It's a still picture soon launched into motion

Photographic caputuring you in a 'flash'
Diving past reality without a spalsh
I'm not down to earth my, head's high in the stars
Foremost goal,to help those heal internal scars

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics
Secret police issue me Pyro~tickets

Poetically I consume the brainswashed thought
Then spit out wonder leaving the masses taught
As soon as my work beging to open eyes
Censorship awakens and begins to rise

2bcontinued

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

1 posted 2006-05-08 03:35 PM

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics

Your rhythm is so prominent and incredible,
keep posting, I'll be watching for it.

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2006-05-08 04:25 PM

this is a good start

I'm not down to earth my, head's high in the stars
Foremost goal,to help those heal internal scars

i like this line

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2006-05-08 04:43 PM

I enjoyed the words and rhythm...

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-05-08 05:00 PM

Much enjoyed your first post.
Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-05-08 05:29 PM

lol

don't care much
for hip hop or rap
this ain't no beginning
it's a wrap!

welcome to Passions
where yes indeedy, newbie sweetie
that redline marker sometimes will rear
it's censorship head,
and sometimes, it instills fear

but more often than not
it is justified right

in order to keep these boards
readable by a wide multitude

~an enjoyable read~

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2006-05-08 05:43 PM

A good start..censorship can happen at times...but a good poet can skillfully get his/her message across almost without people knowing..you will see if you think about it..all words can be substituted...by ones perhaps seldom used now..welcome to PIP...a HIP HOP poet you may be..but do try other expression..you may have a flare for other styles..thank you for these words..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2007-02-27 05:11 AM

Enjoyed!
welcome to passions

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2007-02-27 02:40 PM

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics
Secret police issue me Pyro~tickets
AMAZING SOUND....YOUR on a roll
profoundly captivating...
welcome to the blue pages...write on!!!!

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