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Stirring My Morning With A Stick
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Stirring My Morning With A Stick |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stirring My Morning With A Stick did you ever really exist or were you a flower I dreamed up petals that caressed when caressed an unseen color that lured you in intoxicating elixir that filled my lungs veined pouring through my body when awake hours I have spent with you on mind missing what I didn’t have wishing for more living with a lie of having the best how can you hold a vision something I made up in my mind reaching into the fog to find solid I have given up on less things and gardens are just dirt until planted just some words cut out |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
But withour the dirt there are no gardens, this was a good read  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
But withour the dirt there are no gardens unless of course you're into areophytes and hydroponics...:P, this was a good read |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I don't think the person was made up i think in time the mind makes it seem that way i think my minds done that many times |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"Stirring My Morning With A Stick" I would steal that title but it is a poem in and of itself. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
for everything there is a season... *smile* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Amazing poem Helen and I, too, love the title. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, I LOVE everything about this. I have always been moved, learned life lessons or have related to your poems, BUT this one is now my favourite....it's a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Helen... A wonderful write. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I may be completely wrong, but i will celebrate a glass Of wisdom with you Dave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Good write, good read, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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