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joseph
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0 posted 2006-05-11 09:43 PM




The sun radiates from the sky,
toasting my back like,
bread in a oven.


The sky a brilliant blue,
a zephyr carrying a mist of,
hot refreshing water.


Laying on my back,
on the tickling grass,
The color of water melons.

The final hours wrap me,
in a cool touch,
It wisps me to sleep.


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Clang
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1 posted 2006-05-12 01:40 AM


Welcome to Passions.  I hope you find here a place that you can call home.  This is a great first post.

Keep 'em coming!

Quirks make us interesting!

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2 posted 2006-05-12 05:40 AM


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3 posted 2006-05-12 09:30 AM


Last stanza was my favorite..

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sim0riah
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4 posted 2006-05-12 10:22 AM


Very nice and Nice finish

Welcome

Rich

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5 posted 2006-05-12 11:16 AM


Joseph~
Welcome to PiP !
A lovely, lovely penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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S Arthur Grey
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6 posted 2006-05-12 02:06 PM


Welcome!

I like this style.
Hope to see more.


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7 posted 2006-05-12 02:38 PM


Welcome to Pasion's !!
Much enjoyed your first post.
hugs, Chris

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