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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-11 08:02 PM



"I can turn my day around"
by giving away some smiles.
It's never too far, the distance gone,
no matter the length of miles.

Unlocking this gate that holds me back
can be easily done with gift.
Not the kind that one can touch,
but those that spirits lift.

That holding gate lets moments flee
when latched, resisting stress
that flexes wanting, from behind,
the out and its success.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-05-11 08:08 PM


It's true!

and you, my sweet friend, not only turn a bad into a good day, not just for you, but many times for me as well.



grin...lemme know when you are ready to graduate from a wine cooler to the Smirnoff.

<--it'll make ya do this



lawsy but I love this woman folks!

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-05-11 08:12 PM


lol
a very good heartfelt read, M
and enjoying lady Serenity's reply

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-05-11 08:28 PM


Oh Karen, I wrote this in the early morning but couldn't get my slow aol to load and  finally gave up.

My day went from feeling good to great..to bad...by the evening. So your response has cheered me up.

Thanks Kacy...

M

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-05-11 08:50 PM


keep smiling M
it looks good on ya

Magnus
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5 posted 2006-05-11 09:11 PM


Most wise thoughts M.  You have blended them
well...as well as had it all rhyme so well
together.

sim0riah
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6 posted 2006-05-12 10:43 AM


M Very nice my dear, Very Nice!

Rich

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state of mind
7 posted 2006-05-12 11:33 AM



((((((M))))))
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
8 posted 2006-05-12 02:14 PM


It is a gift that often delights

Dave

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