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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2006-05-11 10:54 AM


divide

what
was once
me,

somewhere
between
the sunflowers
and the sea.

May the birds
and all that cry
on graveyards,

never view
my rotting flesh,

but instead
to find
my garden

flying free.

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2006-05-11 11:01 AM


whoohooo, inked!
so that was you that flew by this morning?
may those poppies bloom forever

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-11 11:19 AM


beautiful


serenity blaze
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3 posted 2006-05-11 08:26 PM


I absolutely love this.

I know I keep saying you get better and better, but you do!

Love the title too--it made this all work for me!


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4 posted 2006-05-11 09:06 PM


Ashes to ashes, dust to dust...so it shall
be...

Well done, excellent thoughts.

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