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Open Poetry #37

Together Forever

troubadour
Junior Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 43
in the land of yore

0 posted 2006-05-10 10:56 AM

We met, my Love, so long ago,
When youth was still a king;
Onto your slender finger I slipped
An infinite golden ring.

And times were great, and times were rough;
Tested was worth of the gold -
But the joyful “’till death do us part”
The only words to behold.

Ah, those were most wonderful years
Swept in a blink of an eye;
Still I am caught in the spell of your smile,
Wrapped in the clasp of your sigh.

Follow me into the depth of the sea,
Guide me into the sun;
Wherever our twin steps shall lead -
The twain shall vanish as one...

t

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-10 01:09 PM

a beautiful write, mister troubadour

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2006-05-11 07:14 PM

troubadour,

I have been at Passions very little lately, but I think this is one of the sweetest, well written poems I have read recently. When I am able to bop in here, your name pops out as a poet whose poems I must read... I've yet to be disappointed!

miscellanea

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-05-11 07:50 PM

Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed.
TD

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