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The Trip |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Trip I took a trip of senses bliss On the fuel of a hug and kiss And fell into a fantasy A garden full of ecstasy And moon light lit a lover’s scene A place that I had never been Silver shafts and golden shrouds That laced the edges of the clouds And webs of lace encased the place A space of magic and of grace A garden full of episodes Where magic fills each path of mode I touched and trembled loved and flew In and out illusions coup Set inside this bubbles vie Never a care, never a sigh I see horizons each new day But cannot leave this wayward stray |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I touched and trembled loved and flew In and out illusions coup Set inside this bubbles vie Never a care, never a sigh ...and a very nice sports car to be riding in...lovely voice this morning Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Yes the bubble is the new shape. Good morning sweet.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved Lee's response here! Another lovely write for my morning Sy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Glad you enjoyed, have a good one. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear "See More" These bubbles are getting more expensive to drive. If we could just blow into them like we do balloons. Thanks. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Delightful Sir Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN LOL the price of dreams has not gone up. Lady, Thank you dear. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
I see horizons each new day But cannot leave this wayward stray That is so good!! Rich |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sim0riah Thank you so much. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
And dang if I didn't run out of gas! Enjoyed your trip though. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
S Arthur Grey Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. I enjoyed this trip with you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you for the read and reply, missed you. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Sure glad I found this one! What a delightful trek. Rae |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rae, The delight is all mine, thank you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
"I see horizons each new day But cannot leave this wayward stray" Another good one Seymour, thanks ...paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, those illusions....darn those illusions and bless those illusions! Much enjoyed this, Sy.......just wish I had more time to get in hear and read a little more.  ....jo |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
i really liked this one. very good. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would love to join you on one of your mind trips...they are very creative M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
shades of paul Thank you my friend. iliana I appreciate when you do. Thank you. Archea, Very good sounds good to me. Doreen, I'd love to take you if I could. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Shoot missed one! I loved one comment left calling you, "See More!" No just ain't that the absolute truth? LOL, you are my daily dose of truth Mr. T. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Been there, done that....wished to have done that...yada yada yada... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, At least I'm a daily dose of something. Magnus "yada yada yada" exactly. Thank you my friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This Saturday *sighs* through Seymour's poetic eyes - 'a trip of senses bliss' ... all of that ... and more~ Thank you dearest Seymour, for being a poet ! OUR POET !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And thank you sweet for being a dear love. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Dear Sy, I am bringing up the rear, tagging along. May your bubble remain aloft on the currents of heart...so glad to share your point of view!  ~ ~ Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, I can't out do your class. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, You are so right about air castles. However, the expense comes when we "build their earthly foundations!" lol |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN Well you are right about that. |
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