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Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08
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0 posted 2006-05-11 12:19 PM


Who is she?

O how i love my bright sunshine that emits young love
Moving gracefuly as a doe, swiftly as a dove
She soon birthed me a new fresh rightous mentality
Welcomes me in her arms with sweet hospitality

I stay on top while her bodys is designed to grind
Through our vibrant interaction, my stress unwinds
Only through her, i get that undescribable rush
We battle and fight, but i dare not tell her to hush

Strong as seven plies of beautiful smoothe maple wood
First ever to notice that I was misunderstood
Now Without her timeless strolls among the street and park
I'd be lonely, incomprehensible, weak and dark

I jumped into this relationship fueled by lucid sweat
My internal being and my soul's framed silhouette
The elements of her compusure is pure nature
Some people, it takes a lifetime to find that stray~cure

if ur still clueless it for my love that has birthed my mentality...my skateboard ha...let me knwo what lines u liek..and if that silhoutte line works...dont get confused by the wordplay...grind, park, street, etc

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