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JesusChristPose
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0 posted 2006-05-10 08:03 PM



There has never been a beauty
That I have seen before
One that summons for battle
The knights of ancient yore

There has never been a woman
That could bring me to one knee.
I marvel at her gorgeousness
A defining of beauty

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2006-05-10 11:46 PM


lol, but how to marvel at her, if you haven't seen her?
oh...an imaginery beauty?

Devious Intellectual
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2 posted 2006-05-11 12:16 PM


hard to understand at first cuz it deep..like it tho, kinda contradicts itself mayb..ha i think u just went over my head i like that tho...keep posting interesting stuff.good stuff by the way...

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-05-11 04:04 AM


outstanding!
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