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Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

0 posted 2006-05-10 12:01 PM

Venom

--and the tyranny of such thoughts
was manifested into the intricate
designs of disassociation.

you have a way to go,
he said to the people.

but, on premises of lacking inheritance,
you've lost the way.
no courtyards for a ballroom blitz--
we're going to sit this one out.

& they sighed relief
(though death was imminent)
then bowed their heads.

we are the chosen implications
of a faltering legacy,
notoriety has expired and consumption

is our god.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-10 12:32 PM

oh, I am enjoying these unique portraits of our dying self-indulgent social orders

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-05-11 10:24 PM

Wow Liz! Just wow!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2006-05-13 11:27 AM

Excellent...by they way, my ex-husbands grandmother ( which I am still very close to ) is named Elizabeth Sinclair

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2006-05-13 12:11 PM

I am really enjoying your poetry, as in the words hides many things to think about. This being another example - well done indeed.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2006-05-13 03:36 PM

Damn...this is beyond excellent....powerful & poignant....I've read it several times already and am still blown away. You're very talented, I wish I could write more like you.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

6 posted 2006-05-16 12:02 PM

I'm sorry for the delay in thanking everyone for their generous commentary...Work, Work, Work. Seriously though, it's much appreciated. Take care.

Liz...Carpe Diem

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