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Open Poetry #37

''It's okay''

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2006-05-15 12:55 PM

They look up at night,
pick a star to watch over their kin.
Far away they fight,
in a war they didnt want or begin.

All the things in their heads they'd say,
but cannot, they are apart.
To whisper, ''your'e here now, it's okay'',
to feel the glow of a loving heart.

Bring speach, bring talk, patience and care,
exercise all possible ways.
Human lives preciously spare,
let the soldiers live out their days.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

1 posted 2006-05-16 12:15 PM

Such a calming ballad for humanity...well done. Thanks for sharing.

Liz...Carpe Diem

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-05-16 06:22 AM

"let the soldiers live out their days."

I just wish there wasn't a need for soldiers but as there is and probably will always be, yes, let them live out their days!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-05-16 08:13 AM

Human lives preciously spare,
let the soldiers live out their days.

this was written with such a nice easy going tone, yet getting a point across...

well done, enjoyed

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