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Open Poetry #37

A Truncated version of ideas

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-09 08:56 PM

Electric Vision

We spiralled thin white connectors aimlessly into the light dark blue to flicker and spark as we propelled elements to connect

Blinded by a sun in rays we held the spasm echoing vibration as heat turned to vision

Swaying we watched as connections made and broke echo’d light on a blinding sky of electric vision defying our desire

I'll try and find the right words tomorrow

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-09 09:03 PM

methinks you found lots of good words already
'blinded by the light....'
there is a song now propelling itself through my ears...

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-09 09:20 PM

Yes I know

But I am neither 'fair not fowl'

To be able to just write "would be my dream" but too late to pay the mortgage, and every second is one, that fouls up the next contract.

Your words are very much appreciated

Unfortunately the bank

Works on the banking standards

And sold on the flank

To Russians, Germans, all with the geld

Words are not welcome

In most of this world

Dave

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