Open Poetry #37 |
If Only |
shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A warm beam or ray that brings on the day, if only I could be the sun. A light so bright that illuminates the night, if only I could be the moon. A cluster diamond sparkle that shines creating dark sky designs, if only I could be the stars. A water's drip that helps to grow the mother ship, if only I could be the rain. A sun, a moon, the stars, the rain, all things played a role of birth, if only I could be the . . . . . paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paul But you are my friend, you are. Enjoyed |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Seymour, thanks so much for the reply..paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a concept! outstanding write! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Good thoughts here..a fine write thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
My thanks to you p.s. from paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Nothing like a goldenrose, thanks for your comments, paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
That's the joy of being a poet, isn't it? - The chance to be the sun and the moon, shining on fellow travelers... Thank you for the thoughts! Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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MonCherie New Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 8 |
How sweet to be all things, to be the earth, the universe. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Good thoughts Ben, thanks........paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Moncherie, yes they are all sweet things.. thank you paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The story is wonderful as well... http://www.macscouter.com/Stories/RC_Stories_Moral.html#Heading36 Nicely done Paul. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Dear Susan, thanks for the story, I enjoyed it. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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