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0 posted 2006-05-09 07:55 PM



Tonight, I shall sit
and smell the freesias on my sun deck,
drink a fine glass of wine,
read some poetry, perhaps in rhyme.

for what good is
~LIFE~
if it cannot be enjoyed?

And as I thusly sit
I shall also hit
upon a poem or a song, maybe both,
perhaps, a chord or two of beautiful music.

For what time is there guaranteed to me tomorrow?

When the bell tolls again
it may well toll for me,
so at this moment in time
I shall immerse myself in passionate rhyme.

Will you sit with me tonight?

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-05-09 07:58 PM


Pulling up a chair...  nicely done Kacy.
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2 posted 2006-05-09 08:01 PM


sounds like a nice way to spend the evening
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3 posted 2006-05-09 08:07 PM


You speak from my heart

"Ben battle was a soldier bold, and used to war's arlarms

A cannon ball took off his legs

So he laid down his arms

And as others carried him from the field

said 'he lets other shoot'

for here I leave my second leg

and the forty-second foot"

Thomas Hood

The closest to a mentor in my writing I have
and these words from Midnitesun are 'Thomas Hood shaped in excellence"

We thought her sleeping when she died and dying when she slept

Sorry Midnite I have gone on, on your words, but is it not a lesser sin, to inspire words

Dave

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4 posted 2006-05-09 08:16 PM


Barry, Dixie, Dave...
pull up a chair
I welcome you
to the poet's deck,
a sanctuary of sorts....

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5 posted 2006-05-09 08:40 PM


T'was the night before the winter
whence I sat upon an ember,
glowing red and hot as hell
was my shorts that now did smell.

And before the moon did set
was perchance a chance to bet
that the coal that left it's ember
would again be my remember!

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6 posted 2006-05-09 08:42 PM


Barry!
that is hilarious!
oh my, what a scent that would be...

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7 posted 2006-05-09 08:51 PM


Oh the scent...it came a wafting
through the door and down the stair.
Had us all there sitting, gasping
for some clean untainted air.

But the door was shut and bolted
from the front and from the rear.
And the scent,  it sat and jolted
from my hands my waiting beer!

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8 posted 2006-05-09 09:00 PM


ROTFLMAO!!!
oh my, but this thread is
well, odorific
or is that
oh, terrific
and now that I am picking myself up
off the deck
grabbing an incense stick, laughing....


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9 posted 2006-05-09 09:17 PM


Oh she scrambled to the kitchen
looking high and low to see
For it was the smell now reachin'
cross the sill and to the sea.

And the sails of sailors wilted,
shrunk and fell upon the deck.
Then the ships leaned hard and tilted
till they all were now ship wrecked.

But the Mate he found a flower
that did smell so nice and pure.
Sat there picking for an hour
no more of this could he endure!

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10 posted 2006-05-09 09:24 PM


chuckling here
and wondering, about the powers of scent
is it any wonder that bees make so much honey?
perhaps, they can't help themselves? LOL
I really DID sit and smell the freesias tonight.
And yes, I really DID imbibe in a glass of wine.
And yes, the bees really DID buzz me today. LOL.
It's a small price to pay, getting stung....

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