Open Poetry #37 |
A Year in Exile |
S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A Year in Exile ~Silence~ ~Time~ No words from her pen Only echoes of flowers dancing . . . rattling dry in a bare breeze, chilled Spring, they say, bears promises to fill emptied vases Freshly! Sweetly! But my garden, not tended, waits . . . needing more than warm tears as this year ends, another begins . . . one of countless many to come, empty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write I've spent some time in exile too but Spring is a wonderful season |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Only echoes of flowers dancing . . . rattling dry in a bare breeze, chilled" but you do know how beautiful dried bouquets are, don't you? good to read you again and offering you a bouquet of fresh flowers that look great when dried |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Enjoyed the descriptive content of this. Well done. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
" . . . rattling dry in a bare breeze, chilled" unique and descriptive, I loved that particular partial sentence... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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