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MonCherie
New Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 8

0 posted 2006-05-09 12:54 PM

As you read this,
your heart will feel me,
ever close to you,
even closer than before.

Even though the earth
kept moving, the winds,
kept blowing, my heart,
never stopped beating.

You are my destiny,
there is no escape,
I have come to know
that now,
resting in peaceful love.

Days have passed,
nights, hours spent away,
yet, the silent echoes
of your voice, still,
they call to me.

In the stillness of night,
it whispers gentle words,
inside my beautiful dreams,
connecting us in sweet slumber.

The moon smiles upon us,
seeing us both, same time,
two distant faces,
from two distant places.

Everything grew, changed,
life went on, as always,
my heart, my love for you,
stood still.

Waiting, knowing of your return,
now I dance in the shadows
of complete happiness,
for the journey has just begun.

My love for you has never changed,
it remains the same,
like a sweet love song of old,
pouring feeling into your soul.

Remember I am there,
with you always,
love never fades,
love never dies.

Love stands still,
frozen in time,
the song forever remains the
same, playing over and over,
forever I am there, locked,
inside your mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-05-09 04:51 AM

welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this piece of love.

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

2 posted 2006-05-09 08:14 AM

The moon smiles upon us,
seeing us both, same time,
two distant faces,
from two distant places.
( I loved it )....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-05-09 09:03 AM

Heart warming first post.
Welcome to Passions.

Look forward to reading more of your talent.
TD

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2006-05-09 09:37 AM

Love stands still frozen in time, we make that moment last forever whilst the world moves around us and our past

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-05-09 10:34 AM

A most beautiful first post!
Welcome to Passions.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

6 posted 2006-05-09 12:22 PM

Oh WOW!! So beautiful for sure. A very pleasurable read. This is sooooo goood!!!!

Welcome

Rich

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2006-05-09 07:27 PM

Welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed this passionate first write, and hope you will share more from your muse.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2006-05-09 07:55 PM

A very nice, softly romantic first post.
Nicely done....welcome to Passions.

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

9 posted 2006-05-09 08:25 PM

Enjoyed very much MonCherie, it makes me think of a letter from home to a soilder in a far away land. A letter to live for! :-)

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

10 posted 2006-05-09 08:41 PM

Words I am pleased to read because they are quality, essence

Yes to say I liked your words a lot

Is an understatement

I liked everything you wrote

A lot

Dave

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

11 posted 2006-05-10 10:14 AM

This was a special write..obviously from a deep feeling soul..thank you...and may i say welcome to pip..hope to read more of your work..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2006-05-10 11:17 AM

Hey!!! Welcome to Pip!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

jarrett
Member

since 2006-05-10

Posts 72
Ut, USA

13 posted 2006-05-10 11:05 PM

I loved this poem.... because really once you find someone that you love there is no turning back. You can't help the person you love even if you try..

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

14 posted 2006-05-11 12:52 PM

Beautiful poem. loved every stanza. Kinda reminds me of my earlier years. Great work, welcome, and keep up the good work.

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