Open Poetry #37 |
Love Flying To The Wind. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I close my eyes to see you. Heart aching to know you completely, to see into you, the glow that i may have ignited within you, excited just for you. A force that is not mine now. Should i leave love on the roadside? Like a leaf golden, but shrivelled and dry, blowing in the wind? Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Never leave love by the roadside Phil. Embrace it for all it's worth... Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Can I ditto Nancy's reply? A lovely write, Phil. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a lovely write! And I love the imagery!!!!!!!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never leave love anywhere too hard to find it again |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Splendid and the title called to me. I agree with the others... never leave love anywhere but with someone who treasures it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very heartfelt was this beautiful, yet sad write, Phil. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely writing, Phil. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
no you shouldn't leave it... |
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