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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-05-08 01:23 PM



                i'm headed to the big city

perhaps, Murfreesboro, to meet a girl so witty

          she'll make me forget how pretty

                               she is

but the fact that she's a mrs.

has me wondering if i should take my biz

                            elswhere



                                                love,

                                                howard

    



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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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1 posted 2006-05-09 05:23 PM


Nice play on words, if not on ideals

It is an old question of whether you love which seems to be a chemical equation or whether you love which seems to be a physical exercise

Physically no different, mentally, very different

Do you approach a good looking woman or an ugly woman, whilst believing you are the handsome one when you start a courtship or dating in your language.

Nice way of raising the thoughts that we should consider

Dave

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