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Open Poetry #37

Innocent Girl

bens101
Junior Member

since 2006-05-05

Posts 32

0 posted 2006-05-07 12:05 PM

    She left me yesterday
    but couldn't say why
    it was like she was drawn
    with wonder and grace
    to something she didn't know.

    Later I learned it was a girl
    beautiful and elegant
    she stole the room
    and captured the essence of perfection
    whenever she simply smiled.

    They were always together
    staring at each other
    crazy for one another
    exploring their bodies
    two flowers passionately in love.
    After I read the note she had wrote
    I knew she had found herself
    because I felt amazing
    knowing she had discovered
    someone to share her life with.

  Benjamin Prins  2006.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

1 posted 2006-05-07 10:24 PM

That was a beautiful poem and well written I give it a 10.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-05-09 05:52 PM

Nice writing...James

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