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Crossing |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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from that terminal door across pavements sometimes wet alcoholics leave some look back others return in the way of traffic other road riders familiar crossings familar bartender and drinking glasses clink favored to fill emptied at will consumed like them that drink to a haze beyond recognition permanent condition they jay walk out bums on the way to another still another watering hole crossing roads in the way. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Written almost abusive You hightlight both sides of drinking and drunks Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
familiar crossings familar bartender and drinking glasss favored to fill emptied at will lived "with" that... M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Martin, so good to read you again! This write hit home, a home I left long ago. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Roads criss crossed time after time until the last road is taken...a fine write here and done with such truth too..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
appreciate your comments, one doesn't have to drink though to image the sortis of many a nameless person here. |
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