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Open Poetry #37

My Queen

bens101
Junior Member

since 2006-05-05

Posts 32

0 posted 2006-05-05 01:58 AM

  Her soft neck
  beautiful hair
  the way she speaks
  how she moves
  all adds up to one thing.

  When I find the words
  to walk up
  and talk to her
  my heart will explode
  because I have waited so long.

  I watch
  as she reaches out
  to pick a rose
  and blow gentely
  the lucky petals falling to the ground.

  At that second
  the sun hits her face
  so I can see her gorgeous blue eyes
  with her perfect smile
  now I'm jealous of the air she breathes.

  Benjamin Prins  2006.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2006-05-05 04:25 AM

this is so sweeeeeeeet

reminds me of "that lucky ole sun"

a nice, heartfelt introduction to Pip

Welcome.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-05-05 07:00 AM

I watch
  as she reaches out
  to pick a rose
  and blow gentely
  the lucky petals falling to the ground.

this brought a smile to my face...so innocently felt....a pleasure to read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-05-05 09:02 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A sweet introduction to our poetic family.
I hope you enjoy your stay here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2006-05-05 02:16 PM

welcome to the passion

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-05-05 02:55 PM

love that ending!

MonCherie
New Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 8

6 posted 2006-05-09 12:08 PM

and you are prince charming!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2006-05-09 03:09 PM

yep...you had me at "Queen"

Welcome to Pip!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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