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BROTHER JOHN
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0 posted 2006-05-06 11:06 PM



If you have not read part one, you need to in order to get a better flow. Your improvements are welcomed! If you do not like satire and humor, this is not for you!


The One-Eyed Guy's Fate (Part 2)

And in time's process, the one-eyed guy stood
Before the Pearly Gates with all his kind
And kin.St. Pete said, "Your sick sins I find
Ranked first in the 'Rule Book' of bad and good!
Remember, the rules state, your 'brotherhood'
Reaps what it sows.A plagiarizing mind
Displays black shadows, worst of humankind
And on earth you'll reap greatly as you should!"

The "stealers of words" laughed in their long line
And planned again how's the best way to glean
And steal words they liked from a fruited vine!

Then each "incarnated" in earth's routine
To reap what they sowed.Yes, worked the divine
Law: each "reborn" ... a copying machine!




[This message has been edited by BROTHER JOHN (05-07-2006 07:35 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-05-07 11:34 AM


BROTHER JOHN
Humor is always in the last laugh. LOL

BROTHER JOHN
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2 posted 2006-05-07 04:54 PM


Dear Seymour,

Yes, you are right.  The law of reaping gets the last laugh!  LOL


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