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howardtsu
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0 posted 2006-05-06 02:35 PM


please sir, let me date your daughter

            she has the water

                   i need

           to romantically feed

     on my heartfelt intentions to weed

away all  of the misunderstandings caused

      when i was too smitten to pause

long enough to let her draw up the correct papers which establishes the clause

that i get to be her Santa Clause

               next Christmas



                                            love,

                                            howard


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-06 03:10 PM


that's cute

always enjoy your rhymes

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-05-06 10:43 PM


lol, did 'she' enjoy reading this?
howardtsu
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3 posted 2006-05-07 04:21 PM


i don't know  

but if she did, i hope so

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