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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-05-04 10:51 PM

Vinegar to Wine

Sweet man
This stew of emotions
Caused the Empress to tuck her skirt
Throw down sweet grape upon the lawn
Dance like fire in the pagan rite
Alas, the bitter tears of reckoning

Yet I
In frivolous defamation of pain
Hike up my skirt
To skate upon the meadow pond
Throwing lilies at your feet
Dancing in the drape of moonlight
Keeping warm the ripening vine

So fine
The changeling of tantalize
Singing softly to you
Clothed in only your eyes
Bringing sweet to my lips
Your finest hour
To dance in dawns first light

Copyright Kkh 05/04/06

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2006-05-05 08:51 AM

TD - I found this a truly delightful write so up it goes for those who have missed it.

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2006-05-05 09:57 AM

TD this makes me want to learn to skate! Enjoyed! :-)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-05-05 03:09 PM

I do love the feel of this one TD

well done!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2006-05-05 05:40 PM

to dance in dawn's first light....is to be truly blessed
this dances from beginning steps to the
final bow..and gets a standing ovation !

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

5 posted 2006-05-06 11:50 PM

This has a lovely mystical quality to it. It sent the mind to another place. Thanks for sharing.

Liz...Carpe Diem

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-05-07 03:49 PM

"Yet I
In frivolous defamation of pain
Hike up my skirt
To skate upon the meadow pond
Throwing lilies at your feet
Dancing in the drape of moonlight
Keeping warm the ripening vine"

Oh TD. This one is exceptional.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-05-07 04:14 PM

Kathleen~

'So fine
The changeling of tantalize
Singing softly to you
Clothed in only your eyes'

*Sighs* of contentment with this reading~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2006-05-07 05:00 PM

good read

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