Open Poetry #37 |
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like us, i confess |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
In the morning sky pirouettes by design the gulls of brooklyn rise, but this day forgets us, the dialect, watered down and the bridge where travolta did the hustle, is dim as the lady of the harbor, swallowed up in this wraparound fog; its 3 years gone where we once sat sipping merlot chatting bout the walrus, lamenting last kisses when we had to say 'see ya next time' where once we layed in checkerboard fields, between concrete playgrounds, and springtime green where dandelions collapse now. Like us i confess, everything has its time. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
brings back lovely memories, good to read you, M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Everything has it's time"... You mesmerize! TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"its 3 years gone where we once sat sipping merlot chatting bout the walrus" Oh inkedgoddess! It's superb. I love your "wraparound fog." |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"In the morning sky pirouettes by design the gulls of brooklyn rise," You sure can set a scene in a readers eye... I can hear them as they wheel above, turning like hands on a clock... enjoyed ---------ice ><> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write with such a wonderful flair, oh Golden Goddesss. Time is invisible, it passes so quickly and then we wonder where it has gone. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess The firmament of the past is now a lament. Excellent write. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
and I swear, each and every time I let myself believe and then the time expires and I am somewhat confused.... ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so glad I didn't miss this one! |
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