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Inside my madness there is nothing but grief.
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Inside my madness there is nothing but grief. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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i could not have mentioned my fate so clearly for i haven't the right to know my fate in the first place... my ending... my bitter ending.. my sorrowful memory.. you are not my armor you are not my strength you are my soul...and i have lost you... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This sounds so sad... I wish you all the best...  Neeraja |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hugs to you gal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I don't think you can lose a soul... very nice Meg."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Meg - this is such a lonely piece. Be still and listen .... your soul has and will always be there ... shining. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i understand |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Forlorn. I enjoyed the write. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh my, this is outstanding, Kaoru!  ...jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This touches deeply! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I ache for your pain, Kaoru, but I agree with Nightshade, your soul is your own. When the ache is a little comforted, look around, and you will find your smile again. - Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you are not my strength you are my soul...and i have lost you... You write such horrible ache... with such beauty. Excellent work! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are the strength and armor for yourself and Freyja~ M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just how I am feeling at this point in time...but life goes on good write |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
seems you are at a point of contention, a point of decision, the ache with which you write is powerful |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I hear a tearful screaming in these words. POWERFUL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Grief is madness is grief... sighing *touching the screen* I love that you dare to delve as deep as you do--but it does ache. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
When I saw the title Meg, before I even read...I KNEW this was gonna tug... purging, and poignant write .... feeling you here, and wishing we never had to feel as this... seek the flame within yourself |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hugs...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Powerful, poignant, I relate...but then again, each case is it's own type of hell....I've read you before and am blown away once again....damn this aches. It's a keeper~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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