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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2006-05-03 10:30 AM


Where to when we die?
Some say “Heaven”
and some, well, think it’s Hell,
and for some,
could be somewhere in the sky.
but how many people know for sure?
How many have worked it out
and know who they are,
where they are going
and what they will do once there?

Now dying is pretty serious business:
it’s a big-time move -
would one go to an airport and say:
“Can I please get on a plane?”
In the real world, you need a ticket,
and a destination, at the very least.
Does “dying” remove responsibility
for what comes next?


So there go the earth Humans
without a clue out into the Cosmos.
No idea where they wish to go
nor how to get there.
And if they do get there,
what do they use for a resume
when asked what they’d like to do?
Looked at this way,
doesn’t it seem rather silly?
No wonder there are so many Humans
crowding each other here!

They go out into the cosmos
thinking that “others” will take them home
not knowing what that is –
so they are put on a great return loop
and when their turn comes
out they pop, back on Earth again...
and again... and again...
and for most, none the wiser.

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
1 posted 2006-05-03 12:43 PM


What is wisdom WindWalker? :-)
I'm trying to live my life as if I'm on a journey that will never end. I believe God is Endless Love and as my journey passes from this life I will trust myself into the hands of that source. I don't need to know what awaits because I believe it is more than I can imagine or understand.    

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-03 01:08 PM


I like your way of thinkin'
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2006-05-03 03:44 PM


It's good to think on these things even though we'll never know the truth while on earth.  I have a cabin there overlooking a river that joins the sea just around the corner and a forest behind and around - definitely no snakes.  Not sure yet what I'll be doing there but people will come for whatever it is I'm offering be it wisdom or sea shells.  Got it all sorted, you see.
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-05-03 11:16 PM



"Now dying is pretty serious business:
it’s a big-time move -"

You really know how to work those words WindWalker! Good stuff here.

[This message has been edited by The Lady (05-04-2006 12:10 AM).]

winewind
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 4

5 posted 2006-05-03 11:25 PM


makes me thinking of everyone is dying, what matters is only the time maybe the ticket to the heaven is just the heart

nice piece!

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