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Fee
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2006-04-29 10:31 AM


Going through a really rough time in nearly every area of my life right now and just trying to find a way to get through.


Going to bed at night
wondering where to find the strength
to face the following day

Life not only dealt a hard hand
it's laid out the whole deck

The past four weeks
placed underneath Gods test

How much can you handle
when you cant face another day

When all you know around you
seems to be falling fast away

Wanting so desperately
to breathe without the pain

Wanting for the sunshine
to warm your heart again

Waking up knowing
things are going to be the same


Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
El_Campeador
Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2006-04-29 11:29 AM


Ah, but you know that the sun will shine again - how much it warms you is up to you. I pray that you will be encouraged today.
Thank you for opening yourself up and sharing from your heart.

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-04-29 01:20 PM


here's hoping things work out for you soon

keep writing, it helps!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-04-30 04:33 PM




Whatever it is that's hurting so, I pray it passes soon. I agree with passing shadows... keep writing.  


latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
4 posted 2006-04-30 09:04 PM


I think this is something we all understand. And yes one day this too will have past and you will smile again. Here's hoping it is sooner than later. best toyou, martyjo
Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
5 posted 2006-05-01 04:40 AM


To quote from forest gump,
Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you'll get but you will get the bad and the good. Life is up's and down's I hope your up's are here come the morning light. Let the sunshine on you.

Debo

Fee
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2006-05-01 09:24 AM


Thank you all for your kind encouraging words, Warmest of hugs.

I know that the sun will still shine and that with time the clouds will part, I gues it sometimes just takes awhile.

Sharing in these pages is what it is all about and the warmth of your replies helps the clouds have a silver lining.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

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