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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hibiscus blossom soft and white behind my ear listen to my heart When he strokes your cool petals When his breath touches your flesh Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's soft and beautiful Nan. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, Are you thinking of holidays? There were hints of Hawaii in this. So lovely, so very soft and lovely. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful one |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks guys. I wrote it thinking of Hawaii. I wish I could go back, everything is covered in flowers. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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