my first post will be 'Inspire'

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my first post will be 'Inspire'

shmity72
Junior Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 26
wa usa

0 posted 2006-04-29 05:43 AM

Inspire my pen,
my window of youth,
I see the clouds,
of imminent truth,

I hear their roar,
a shameless death,
I smell the mists,
of Venus's crest,

I feel my hand,
I don't need a tooth,
to inspire my pen,
my window of youth.
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esoteric, yes. any other comments?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-29 06:14 AM

Welcome to Passions!

I like this first post of yours! Will be looking for more!

shmity72
Junior Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 26
wa usa

2 posted 2006-04-29 06:16 AM

ty. i wrote a poetry book about 4 years ago...now i am engulfed with computer design but I do need the outlet of poetry. thnx again for the welcome.

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-04-29 06:17 AM

Each beginning is another to start, thanks for sharing

a poet who cares

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