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blitz
Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 19


0 posted 2006-04-28 09:14 PM



why is it life hates me so...
who all wants me dead
how can it show
tell me now before I go
or else I will never know
where your feeling truly lay
I know my life isn't worth much
but you said to me its worth everything
I have to disagree I am worth only that of what you are to me
and your life is more than everything
your life is worth that of the universe
and maybe even more

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-04-28 11:15 PM


Certainly much passion here...
Why do you think life hates you?
It only challenges the noble of heart, for only they would notice.
Must have something special planned in your destiny.
TD

Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-04-29 02:05 AM


I agree with Diamond destiny must have something special in store
For you pour out your heart for all of us to see, And I see something great

Debo

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