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Debo
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0 posted 2006-04-26 09:57 PM



As the days go by she fill's your mind with lies.
Building the walls that soon suround you.
When the last brick is placed
She will leave you to face the truth.
Alone Again....  

© Copyright 2006 Debra Rachelle - All Rights Reserved
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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1 posted 2006-04-26 10:24 PM


Debo, I hate it when that happens! :-)
Debo
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2 posted 2006-04-26 11:01 PM


Well all I can say is it didn't happen to me
It happened to someone I thought was my friend, Only to find that he deserved what he got.  Sad but thats Karma

Debo

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-04-27 09:34 AM


yep, karma for sure
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-04-27 02:55 PM




Nicely done Debo.


Debo
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5 posted 2006-04-27 10:01 PM


Thanks for the sweet replys
I am finding that I like this poetry site

Debo

BROTHER JOHN
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6 posted 2006-04-29 01:18 AM


Debo,

Thanks for your words.  But, too, truth can be beautiful.

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