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A Cane Day
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A Cane Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Cane Day I leaned upon my cane in pain Seeing the sky and coming rain Listening to the rumbles in space Watching the throw of lightening lace The echo’s fill my listening ear Scattering all my thoughts of clear And pain fills my knee and back Another twist of the weathers rack Each storm that passes stays with me It leaves a little pain you see It’s now the scenery above my stage Compliments of advancing age And though I take it all in stride There is no place in day to hide I still can’t seem to bring my mind To think this grant and gesture kind So I have ground it to a pill An antidote to boost my will |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Excellent words, the pain obviously is not And the pill to ease Dave |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have a finger just the same Aging now, its bend is "lame!" LOL Oh Sy, only you can make me laugh at my own aches and pains, and this wonderful thing called, life! It's when we don't have a cane, and don't need the Advil, that is when I am going to start to really worry not now, how about you?  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I know this...  you are the grandmaster of rhyme. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, you poor little puppy. You write so well of your ails! At least you can still wag your tail!  Love and healing kisses (but not on your tail!  )EA  P.S. Here is a magic potion for what ails you! Oh, I better make that two potions!  |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Yeah I have them every time the blue sky turns black while the thunder starts to cracks. Great write though Debo |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
"See More", our pain is our gain and you have done it again. Thanks |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I hear you speaking and I hear you creaking and alas... I know excatly what you're talking about... Thanks for the smile Sy. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Well Sy.....Every time I go see the Doc. I ask for a new body....Still don't have one. Guess I'll go take an Excedrin. Hugs BonBon  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bodger Thank you so much for the read and comment. Sharon, It was really about Isabel. She feels all these things and is going for a knee replacement the 17th of May. My poem was in empathy.  Susan, Thank you my dear. Earth Angel You are a love. Read my answer to Sharon. Debo Thank you, there are many people that feel the weather. BROTHER JOHN LOL Enjoyed your reply. Lady And thank you for the smile. Bonnie j Well we are getting closer, my Isabel will be going in for a knee replacement on the 17th. Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You comment came when I was writing. Thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice words  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well I certainly am pleased that it wasn't you! But I'm not pleased that it is your beloved Isabel either! I will be praying that all will go well with her surgery ~ and that she won't hit you with her cane if her pain does not bring out the best of her!  Love and hugs to both of you, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Ever thoughtful, thank you sweet. |
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