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Open Poetry #37

Sometimes she prays

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2006-04-24 11:29 PM

Dad, I talked to father Bill
I confessed
I miss you
and
I wonder
When you confessed
last

Bet it's been a while
he does not seem to mind
how long its been
say sorry now
and I won't
either
much..

My mom seems
to pray so much
now
for both of us
and I pray alot sometimes
sometimes......

sometimes
I just pray for
you..

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-04-25 01:02 AM

touching - the one word to my thoughts

a poet who cares

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-04-26 01:19 AM

I agree...touching and poignant. It feels real.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-04-26 06:09 AM

this is wonderful Steve

how very touching

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