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Open Poetry #37
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backtash123
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since 2006-04-22
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0 posted 2006-04-23 08:13 AM

Anastasia again
how dear you are to me
make me clever near you
watch as I riddle my soul
and make you love me more
walk with me tonight
to the forever dance we go
join me dear, and you will
because we are two birdds
each with feathers
and if they tell us different
than we fly away
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Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2006-04-23 08:38 AM

What a very sweet poem.  Almost reminded me of the oldies song, Puppy Love.  It put a smile on my face and made me think of young love.  I really enjoyed your short little emotion packed poem.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca
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