Love - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #37

Love

backtash123
Junior Member

since 2006-04-22

Posts 46

0 posted 2006-04-22 03:47 PM

Do you know superiority when you see it?
its getting hot in here
and sweat trembling from my arms
her green eyes are driven
his memory has not faded
competition, he's a hurricane
destructing everything in its path

We are like two brothers
brought together for the love of family
but I hate him like Abel
she is a cloud, not allowing
me to see the stars
behind her decadent eyes
experiencing from far the storm,
instead I hide

Her heart is taken by another
their romantic crazy kiss is too much
two in the morning, and this nightmare!
so much pain, but i rise
closing the door, shudders in chills
caressing memories, a flashback

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-22 05:05 PM

welcome to Passions

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2006-04-22 05:12 PM

Welcome to Pip...

I will be looking for your work, as this is one of the best I've read on here in awhile....hope you enjoy your stay....

Greeneyes~

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2006-04-22 05:53 PM

This was fantastic

-Juju

backtash123
Junior Member

since 2006-04-22

Posts 46

4 posted 2006-04-23 08:00 AM

Thanks you for your kind replies. I felt strongly in despair when writing this poem, but deeply in love. I'm delighted I have found this forum!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.