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Twenty Years Old (no I'm not 20 in case you're wondering lol)
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Twenty Years Old (no I'm not 20 in case you're wondering lol) |
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miabug Member
since 2006-04-19
Posts 59Canada |
A poem from a few years back - I decided to post it after I read "Word Play" from time prophet, posted 04-22-2006 *** Twenty Years Old If being twenty years old Is believing in endless love And in rare, but true friendship If it is having the world at your door And desire to see it all If it means never loosing hope, Never walk back, never give up If it is having a thousand dreams And work hard to make them true If when you are twenty years old Life is like an open book Then in many years from now I may read my last page, like us all But I swear that in my heart I will be twenty forever… September 2001 - by Marie-Ève C. *** Mia  Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Being 20 in heart, and 80 in wise... seems like a good place to be. I liked this, Mia. And as you said to me recently, it is a good place to be for the poets are fine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mia, perhaps it's because we are both from the YOUNG country of Canada! ~ but I feel as though I will be 20 forever as well!  Enjoyed your poem and your spirit! Would the little girl in you like to come out and play with the little girl in me?  Happy hugs, EA  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mia, anyone that knows me well knows that I believe in Peter Pan  I refuse to age! It is a healthy way to be. Playing with children keeps you young as does hard work, and both - wow, you will stay young forever trust me (well at least on the inside.) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
In agreement.Good you found the secret at so young an age. Believing makes it so. martyjo |
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Les Gartner Junior Member
since 2006-04-10
Posts 37MD |
Hi Mia, Your poem reminded me of "When I was one and twenty I heard a wise man say..." Thank you for bringing to mind a wonderful poem by your choice of beautiful words. Les |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mia, Those are the words of a twenty year old. LOL enjoyed. |
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miabug Member
since 2006-04-19
Posts 59Canada |
lol Probably because I was nearly twenty when I wrote it. hehehe That aside... I still believe in all those things and despite a couple of years in the bottom of no where, I still persue my dreams... I am not one to give up. My heart will remain young as long as I'll believe. Mia Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C. |
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