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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-01-12 04:09 PM



You can cut yourself by accident
while prepping veggies in the sink.
You can cut yourself on parchment
writing your heart in poetic ink.
You can cut yourself while shaving,
playing cards and dominoes,
or while innocently scratching
those annoying mosquito bites
you find between your toes.

But the deepest cut you’ll ever know
is when you cut yourself off
from the love of your humanity,
thinking you are a solo player,
playing the game of life on your own.

  "No man is an island.
   No man stands alone."

Some wise person said that
a long, long time ago.
I simply repeat it now,
in case you didn’t know
it is a universal truth.

You can cut yourself by accident
while prepping veggies in the sink.
You might even bleed a little,
but not enough to make you think.
But when you cut yourself off
from the arms of humanity,
you lose your soul,
and perhaps your life,
as you embrace the weakest link.

*
reposted from 2002, just because

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2006-01-12 04:14 PM


A very useful and heart-warming piece of advice from a very warm-hearted person.  Thank you for this.  I enjoyed it immensely.

- Owl

iliana
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2 posted 2006-01-12 05:07 PM


Kacy-lady, you are full of sage wisdom today!  Enjoyed the rhythm and the thoughts of this.   ...jo
RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2006-01-12 05:42 PM


Yes i cut myself while shaving i look like i've been in a fight pretty funny, plus i also cut my arms and hands cos i have this machine at work you throw card into it but if your in a rush you walk away with slices all over lucky they heal up not really that big

and i've had that deep cut

good write

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4 posted 2006-01-12 05:46 PM


Owlie and Jo, thanks!
oh, dear Red Stone, please be careful! thanks for visiting

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5 posted 2006-01-12 05:51 PM


In retrospect, this is exactly what I did... I wish I had read this four years sooner o.O Ah well, lessons learned, I'm going to add it to my library for future reminders

and then He created the horse...

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6 posted 2006-01-12 07:58 PM


Kacy,  your wisdom has been showing a lot
lately...and that is a good thing!

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7 posted 2006-01-12 08:20 PM


You are wise beyond your years sweet lady.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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8 posted 2006-01-13 08:49 AM


Isolation of self and spirt leads to so much despair.  Well said, Kacy.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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9 posted 2006-04-18 05:32 PM


Very nicely done!

Eric

Martie
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10 posted 2006-04-18 05:50 PM


Kacy...I admire you and these words!  
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11 posted 2006-04-18 06:05 PM


You caught me by surprise, Ethome. glad you enjoyed the read. Martie, hugs to you, you are always so kind in your replies.
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12 posted 2006-04-20 05:22 AM


There is truth here..yes..i hear it..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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13 posted 2006-04-22 07:41 PM


There's so much reality in this poem that a lot of people do not even realize or better yet take for granted!
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14 posted 2006-04-22 07:51 PM


"No man is an island, entire of itself; every man is a piece of the continent, a part of the main; if a clod be washed away by the sea, Europe is the less...any man's death diminishes me, because I am involved in mankind"  John Donne

Good write Midnight. Enjoyed..martyjo

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15 posted 2006-04-22 08:07 PM


Reminder of a mistake... truly well written. Thanks for sharing.
I am glad I could heal my cut

Mia

Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C.

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