Open Poetry #37 |
Casting Thoughts |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Casting Thoughts I linger between the words through eyes that want to close and fill the empty spaces with a rekindling of you. I study your face, trying to read your thoughts turning them into lyrics to sing unto my heart... sharing a sheerness in the shadows of our minds. I feel the pleasure, the artistry of observations, a mind's eye treat as I view behind the glasses an unconditional softness to sway me into you. So I write these words and think these thoughts (out of reach) wrapping them around me to get me through another night. Yes, today I feel, this evening I dream, tomorrow I will live... the promises that I keep. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"So I write these words and think these thoughts (out of reach) wrapping them around me to get me through another night. Yes, today I feel, this evening I dream, tomorrow I will live... the promises that I keep." Simply lovely Maureen.. with a promise of tomorrow. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I loved that last verse especially |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Just beautiful words from your heart. Really loved the last verse...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Reminded me of fishing. Cast out, then slowly reel it in hoping something will bite and catch... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah this reminds me of ....me...but years ago....it has been so long that I ceased to dream........tis good to read that you still do |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Very touching...nice write! |
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