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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-04-18 06:50 PM


Casting Thoughts

I linger between the words
through eyes that want to close
and fill the empty spaces with
a rekindling of you.

I study your face, trying
to read your thoughts
turning them into lyrics
to sing unto my heart...
sharing a sheerness
in the shadows of our minds.

I feel the pleasure,
the artistry of observations,
a mind's eye treat
as I view behind the glasses
an unconditional softness
to sway me into you.

So I write these words
and  think these thoughts
(out of reach) wrapping them
around me to get me through
another night.

Yes, today I feel,
this evening I dream,
tomorrow I will live... the promises
that I keep.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2006-04-18 07:16 PM


"So I write these words
and  think these thoughts
(out of reach) wrapping them
around me to get me through
another night.

Yes, today I feel,
this evening I dream,
tomorrow I will live... the promises
that I keep."

Simply lovely Maureen..
with a promise of tomorrow.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-04-19 03:09 AM


I loved that last verse especially
Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2006-04-19 10:35 AM


Maureen...Just beautiful words from your heart. Really loved the last verse...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2006-04-19 01:08 PM


Reminded me of fishing.  Cast out, then slowly reel it in hoping something will bite and catch...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

luminosity
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5 posted 2006-04-20 10:17 AM


ah this reminds me of ....me...but years ago....it has been so long that I ceased to dream........tis good to read that you still do
sweetberry
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6 posted 2006-04-22 07:45 PM


Very touching...nice write!
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