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My Waterfall
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My Waterfall |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality 
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I put out the welcome mat, at my waterfall habitat. You see I need some liquid peace, assisting with my stress release. Just outside my door, to warm you to your core. It starts up high, a nature reply to the eye. A falling water sound, surrounds the ears around. The shelfs of slate shine with the flow, dropping to Round Lake below. All day long the falls delights, of course at night it's all in lights. As bubbles disappear, this poem's end is near. One more thing, frogs algae green, also love the scene. For this cascade serenade, I would never want to trade. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you [This message has been edited by shades of paul (04-22-2006 04:37 PM).] |
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miabug Member
since 2006-04-19
Posts 59Canada |
Sounds like a lovely place... Beautifully described Mia Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thank you Mia..................paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul, I thoroughly enjoyed this welcomed offering of liquid peace!  Water blessings, EA  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
With spring a-bloom, summer can't be far behind and picnic time. The water, a blanket upon the grass, and a book... or maybe a friend to share the magic. You've painted such an enticing picture!  ~ Karen |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Earth Angel, Earth Angel, thanks.......paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
To Karen, a warm thanks in spring.......paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my roommate took his waterfall garden down and he's thinking of creating some kind of Budda garden now...he just comes up with projects to keep himself busy I think...but I sure do miss the waterfall and pond beautiful write here Paul |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
I just got it going yesterday, and it looked so good I was inspired to write this poem, Kinda corny, huh ? paul...p.s..Thanks shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
I may sound corny to you but to me it sound like liquid cool relief.. Loved the write Paul Debo |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Wow, thanks for all the responses ! You made my day !......................paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"You see I need some liquid peace, assisting with my stress release." Lovely write paul...not corny at all. A waterfall is so good for the soul. Enjoy. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Always great to hear from The Lady.... thanks,paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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