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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
The good times we've had have been so precious The hard time, they have built a love so true Though the dark clouds sometimes Hide There silver lining in the darkest hour The sun comes shining through. Though we search for love In old familiar places But we come around to face reality When are hopes and dreams Are built upon tomorrow It's just us babe, It's just you and me. It's just you and me when are friends Are gone and we are all alone When the chips are down And we come around to face reality It's just us babe, It's just you and me. With tenderness we built a strong foundation Through good and bad we stored up memories And for awhile we walked life's road together And with each step I've loved you can't you see. So it's with this thought I take up pen and paper And with all my heart, I write this melody "Yes" Our hopes and dreams are built upon tomorrow It's just us babe, It's just you and me.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i like this...it sounds like a song  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
I agree with PS it is a song and I can hear old Johnny singing it. A bittersweet quality that just makes you want to say, You can do it! Or, Ya'll can do it! :-) |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Thanks for the nice reply. And yes it is a song and yes it is sung to a country beat, and I mean old country beat Thanks again you two Debo |
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