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CantThinkofaUserName
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since 2006-04-27
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0 posted 2006-04-27 12:37 PM


Hello all, I'm new to this site, and I am new to writing poetry... I'm still not completely familiar with all the "rules" but I do the best I could.  I'm just not fully aware of all the guidelines with meters and rhymes all that..But I'll post them anyway.  This is all about the girl of my dreams.  All the words came from my heart and feelings.
I call this one "My True Love"


If you needed to be saved,
I’d be your hero
If you wanted to be loved,
I’d be the one to love you
If you ever were to fall,
I’d be right there to pick you up
If you wanted to be adored,
I’d be the one to adore you

If you needed a friend,
I’d always be there for you
If you needed a man in your life,
I’d be the perfect man for you
If you wanted to love me,
I’d embrace your love with open arms
If anyone tried to hurt you,
I’d save you from their harm

If you ever wanted to cry,
I’d be there to cry with you
If you ever wanted to run away,
I’d be right there running with you
If you ever needed a shoulder to lean on,
I’d always be there for you
If you ever wanted to talk,
I’d be right there to listen

When I’m feeling sad,
Your smile makes me happy
When I’m feeling mad
Your presence makes me cheery
Since you’re not around,
Life is very dreary
I need you in my life,
Without you it’s hard living.


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mariae
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since 2006-04-24
Posts 54
Denmark, Europe
1 posted 2006-04-27 06:37 AM


You are a loving person, your poem really shows how much you care :-)
Don't worry too much about guidelines now. We all write in different ways.
Welcome to the site!!
Maria

-In a world of thoughts-

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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2 posted 2006-04-27 06:52 AM


Hi! Welcome to pipTalk! Your username cracked me up!

Both your sense of humour and your loving heart will be a nice fit with this family of kindred spirits of poetic souls!  

Your expressions of love were sweet, tender, and very touching.

Warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel
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