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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-04-20 09:25 AM


Sore Worn

My seven league boots are sore worn
Weary the intrigue and soar near gone
Now I wonder the wiles of those gleams
Those that come in the wilds of my dreams

They take me places I’ve never been
Fields of new that I’ve never seen
They are a refuge, harbors from pain
A new kingdom for me to reign

I take off my boots every night
Look to the stars and gleams of bright
Rev up my magic carpet of wish
Watch the screen from my radar dish

And though the report is slower now
It seems a pace I can take somehow
And I revel in the opulence
The sentience and experience

Forgive me my nods of sleep its
Not the company but my tide of neap


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Toerag
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1 posted 2006-04-20 10:20 AM


sEEmore...YOU HAVIN' ALOT OF DREAMS ARE YA?
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-04-20 11:07 AM


Toerag
Yea Toe, reams and reams of dreams. Glad your feeling well enough to be here.

suthern
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3 posted 2006-04-20 02:48 PM


Can I borrow your dream blanket? *S*

I'm wondering, though... do you have a typo in the second verse? Should refuse be refuge?

Either way... great write! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-04-20 02:53 PM


suthern
LOL you are right guess I'm geting old.
Thank you sweety.

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